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Old 06-16-2006, 02:11 AM
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I wrote this poem, I don't know if I will read it at the wedding but I think I may put it on the program or something . I have a son who my fiance has pretty much taken on as his own, so please note this while reading my poem:

A special love for you and me
As boundless as the earth and sea
You're there for me, and me for you
And so one heart is made from two
Throw in the child that claimed my love
My little blessing from above
And so a family we will make
With the vows we soon will take
-by Rachel Halpern


I just though I would share this. Let me know if it doesn't work, I don't want to publish it if it "sucks" . Thanks for reading!!!
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Old 06-16-2006, 02:40 AM
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Aww, it's beautiful girl. Go for it!
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Old 06-16-2006, 02:46 AM
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You have to! It's too lovely not too!
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Old 06-16-2006, 03:09 AM
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Definitely use it during the ceremony somehow. It's sweet and heartfelt! Nice job!
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beautiful. go for it!
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That is so beautiful! You should definitely read it or put it in the program or both.
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Yeah, you have to use it.

I got goosebumps
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I give it
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Its beautiful
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Very nice, definitely use it.
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Old 06-19-2006, 02:38 AM
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I love it!!
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