which verse?

[fallbride]

Just a question for you ladies. I was wondering which verse you like the best. Fh has 2 boys and I have 1 girl.

Choice 1:

It was love at first sight
but more important was the moment I realized
that I couldn’t imagine my life without you in it
Bride and Groom
invite you to share their joy
as they are married
on Day
Year
at Time
Location
Address
City, State
Through this union we will also
create a new family with our children
Children’s Names

Choice 2:
BRIDE
and
GROOM
together with their children
NAMES
invite you to share with them
a celebration of love
Their marriage ceremony will take place
on DAY
YEAR
at TIME
LOCATION
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE

Choice 3:
My family, your family - blending as one
Sharing, caring - a new life's begun
Please share in their joy as
BRIDE
and her children, CHILDREN'S NAMES
are united as a family
through marriage with
GROOM
and his children, CHILDREN'S NAMES
on DAY
YEAR
at TIME
LOCATION
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE

Choice 4:
My family, your family - blending as one
Sharing, caring - a new life's begun
BRIDE
and
GROOM
along with their children
CHILDREN'S NAMES
invite you to join in the blending
of their families through marriage
on DAY
YEAR
at TIME
LOCATION
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE

[ljeagle]

I like 4 the most but I also like 2!

[Heather]

Sorry Fall, I voted but didn't comment. I chose number 2. I think it's simple which is normally my preference over more wordy.

[555Ann555]

I like nuber two for a few reasons...

• It is simple enough that you only have to read it once!
• It covers all the information your guests will need
• Because it keeps all the kids names together it really embraces the idea of your joined families

I like #4 too, but I think #2 is a little more elegant.

[maroki13]

I agree, I like number 2.

[breezy]

I like #4